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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 21 May 2014

How To Be A Good Discoverer

HOW TO BE A GOOD DISCOVERER:  CRAFT
Remember the S.E.E. structure
S
Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
E
Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E
Evidence - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Title
What is your Explanation about?
How to be a Good Discoverer
Introduction
What are you going to explain?  Why is it important for us to pay attention to what you have to say?
Hey you! Are you wondering about the world that we live in, all the beautiful mysteries about it, the human body and many more? It’s time to pay attention people of all ages, because even though you are old doesn't mean you know everything, and even though you are young doesn't mean that you are dull. This is one of the most important times to learn about the universe because a lot of things are going on in our world right now. If you have any questions on how to be a good discoverer, keep reading...
Paragraph One
What is the first thing a good discoverer needs to do or have?  Why?  How will that help us?
The world as we know it is such a beautiful place.  Day by day a discoverer discovers things that we are still wondering about. A good discoverer has an open mind. This means whenever another discover does something better than you, you can swallow your pride and be able to admit it.

You also have to be motivated and have a creative mind as also as an open mind. You must be able to have an open mind so you will be honest  because one day someone will or might do something greater than you.
Paragraph Two
What is the first thing a good discoverer needs to do or have?  Why?  How will that help us?
A discoverer has many different techniques of being motivated. One of them is being curious. Being curious means when he/she is motivated to learn something but he/she doesn't know but wants to know. This means wanting to know something that they don't know already. If you do that then you will be able to be more enthusiastic motivated to discover everyday life.
Paragraph Three
What is the first thing a good discoverer needs to do or have?  Why?  How will that help us?
Last but not least, sacrificing some of your daily life to discover. This means instead of going to a party, you might have to stay and wait for the results or having to give up boys night or girls night. If you do this then you will find that you are a hard worker and you'll be a responsible discoverer, and after you have worked hard, you will be able to get back into the fun stuff in life.
Conclusion
The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.
Well now you have heard it all from my explanation on how to be a good discoverer. If you keep on doing this you will become more curious with your researching, a sacrificer who finds the truth, then has fun later, and also, a great discoverer if you have a creative mind.Bare in mind, a discoverer always asks the question ‘Why?’.



Thursday, 6 March 2014

7 Word Classes

This is my presentation about the 7 word classes. Do you know what they are?

Friday, 14 February 2014

Tuesday, 3 December 2013

My Speech - Lean On Me

This presentation is about my speech relating to peace.

Monday, 11 November 2013

Friday, 25 October 2013

How To Make fettuccine

Shopping List:

Two bottles of beachmall, 1 packet of boneless chicken breast, 1 packet of pasta and lastly 1 bowl  of sour cream.

Now step by Step:

Step 1:

Heat up your pot to a maximum pressure of 60 degrees and then put ALL of you pasta in it ( give it 8 to 15 minutes to cook),

Step 2:

Cut you boneless chicken breast into squares,

Step 3:

Then heat up your pot and then throw your chicken breast in for about 5 to 8 minutes until you could see it is starting you whiten up, 

Step 4:

After that you pasta should be cook so drain it out and then chuck it in the pot,

Step 5:

Pour half of the sour cream and then pour all of the beachmall,

Step 6:

Lastly, tos and turn the feta until you could see the beachmall is spread over every where then that means it's cooked,


Then all you have to do now is get a plate and fork and EAT!!!


9 Ways To Annoy Your Sister

9 Ways to Annoy Your Sister

  1. Say she is fat
  2. Not replying to her
  3. Asking her questions 
  4. Change the channel
  5. Playing on her netbook
  6. Going on Facebook when shes home
  7. Not doing my homework but playing games
  8. Being to slow around the basin on foot not on bike
  9. Eating her chocolate, drinking her drink or eating her food

Tuesday, 22 October 2013

Poem About The Sunset

For every one of us a last sunset is like a first,
A saying that has been around for years that came from someone really wise,
And every sunset that we see is one nearer to our eyes,
This evening the sun is like a huge orange ball,
Set behind the Mt Wellington hill,
It’s very very small,
And how many more sunsets for me since time does not stand ever still,
I watched it disappear from view where it set the sky was red,
A weather sign in the twilight sky of warmer days ahead,
For all of us a last sunset so very very true,
No matter what we achieve in life some of us are almost due.


Friday, 18 October 2013

Description about the Beach.

Description Framework

Introduction
The first sentence introduces and classifies the topic

Middle
  • In-depth description about the topic.

  • The 5 senses are commonly used to develop and support the ideas of descriptions.

  • The description may show rather than tell the reader what something/ someone is like using precise similes or metaphors to create images/pictures in the mind.

  • Strong development of the experience "puts the reader there" focusing on key details. It is focused and concentrates only on the aspects that add something to the main purpose of the description

Ending
  • Leave the reader with a sense of feeling - e.g enjoyment/wonder








It was morning I couldn't wait for today, beautiful today is finally here. When I got up i woke the rest of my family up and told them to hurry up. As they woke up I got my clothes ready for the beach. After that I went downstairs to help my mother pack the brilliant lunch that she had prepared then we were off to the beach! When we got to the beach we sprinted onto the sand. As i was walking along the beach, the bright sun is nearly hot enough to cover you in an invisible blanket of warmth. The beautiful, big blue ocean's waves are crashing against the cliffs as you watch the seagulls joyfully fly around in circles in the air. The warm, golden sand runs between your toes with the gentle breeze. As you walk along the beach you find gorgeous, shiny shells that have been washed into the shore by the rippling of the water. When you step in the sea you could feel the cold misty waves crashing on your feet. As you get deeper and deeper into the sea you could taste the saltiness of it. As it was heading off to the afternoon we had lunch. My mum had packed it before we came to the beach. After lunch we spent a couple more hours in the freezing, light blue sea until it was time to go back home and have a shower. I told my mum when we got home that this is a good day out and then she told me to go into my cozy bed to go and sleep. As I fell asleep I thought that I couldn’t wait for the next holiday to come!






Tuesday, 24 September 2013

Making Money When I Grow Up




Making money makes me Happy
I live for my paycheck for it to raise
I will do anything that pays
Truth be told I would rather work
As a pilot in perk
the car, the house, the kids and the wife
cause you can’t hold onto anything without the tool that pays for life
its money its green and can give you a high
but to tell you the truth it’s just a big lie
you don’t need money to do anything at all
But you can take my word for it or not it’s your call

If I Won Lotto


Lotto
It is my motto
if I win the lotto
to run and go
work a no show

May as well
dream here as in bed
thoughts of you
will always be in my head

When I'm relaxing
on my ship
and having a wee nip
I'll think of those
not on the trip

But if its you and not me
Remember that I thought of these things

My Favorite Netbook Game

Thursday, 12 September 2013

Seasons Poem


Summer is the air of air-conditioners
Autumn is back-breaking hours of leaf-raking
Winter is chilblains, T.V and  electric blankets
Spring is fresh-born flowers beckoning the sun


What makes A Kiwi Kid? - Poem


A kiwi kid cheers for the Warriors and All Blacks until they lose 
their voice
A kiwi kid spends all their money on jelly tips.
A kiwi kid eats jafar's until their stomachs explode
A kiwi kid goes boogie boarding for 1 whole day
A kiwi kid goes down the road and feeds ducks with bread
A kiwi kid makes pancakes for their mum and dad for mothers 
day or fathers day
A kiwi kid goes to the beach and skips rocks on the sea
A kiwi kid can do all these things, the only thing that kiwi kids 
do not do is be naughty!









Wednesday, 11 September 2013

Parody Rhyme


Hush little baby don't say a word, mama's gonna buy you a mockingbird and if that mockingbird don't sing mama's gonna buy you a chicken wing and if that chicken wing don’t shine mamas gonna make you a apple pie.

My Acrostic Poem

Creamy taste with every little bite
Heavenly, it fills my appetite
One mouthful fills me with delight
Cadbury is always nice
Only 1 piece is not alright
Let your senses come alight
All the types, dark, milk and white
Teases my taste buds, it is such a delight
Eat it now, don't want to wait for tonight


Tuesday, 10 September 2013

Cyber Smarts

This is my presentation about cyber smarts.